Review: The Rough Draft

 Still feeling unsure of the narrative and shots, I didn't feel satisfied with the film that we had shot. The ending scenes were still lacking the build up tension that I desired. Seeing the shots all joined, I still didn't feel content and wanted to improve on the narrative, the music was lacking the build up and the uneasiness that i wanted. Furthermore, I felt like the ghost's appearance was making the whole enigma and thriller weak. I discussed this with my team members however since they didn't feel the same, I didn't further propose the idea. 

However, I still wanted my teacher's feedback since my team members felt as if the film didn't need any further improvement.

Here is the Rough Draft made by my team member, Zahra:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Q4ORk48pHp-yTNimjWNQ2J0rGUbQFZax/view?usp=sharing